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I'm so sorry this chapter took so long to post. I got stuck, hard. Fortunately the next one is almost finished and should be up within the next week or two. (And it's a Luca chapter! Hooray!) (Seriously, when did writing Luca become so much easier than writing Robert? Have I stumbled into Opposite World?)

Thanks to [livejournal.com profile] voidmancer, [livejournal.com profile] heliosette, [livejournal.com profile] annae89, and [livejournal.com profile] yingtai for being amazing beta readers!




CHAPTER 15

The steps to the King's dais hadn't seemed that steep from the ground, but now, climbing them, Robert felt as though each riser was a mile high. )
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The results from the poll I posted were pretty decisively in favor of shorter chapters more often -- which would have been my vote as well, since it seems like the easiest schedule for me to stick to in terms of updates.

Thanks to everyone who voted! I'm truly grateful for any feedback I get. *g*

Also, if anyone has any advice for getting LiveJournal to stop fucking up my formatting, it would be really appreciated. I have to go back and edit every entry several times after posting it because line breaks and periods get mysteriously deleted.
CHAPTER 14
A bead of sweat ran down Robert's forehead. )

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I'm not totally happy with this chapter but I'm sick of poking at it. So I am surrendering the damn thing to LJ and moving on with the story.


(One of my New Year's resolutions was to be less self-deprecating. Ahem. It's a work in progress?)




CHAPTER 12 cont'd

Lyonesse was still in a state of convalescence after Bacchanal. )

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Posting this from a Starbucks outpost as the WiFi in my apartment has been dead for months. Grad school applications, job hunting, roommate drama, romantic tragedy and sundry medical issues have consumed my life. In the immortal words of Cathy, "Ack!"

CHAPTER 10


By the time Robert arrived back at the flat it had begun to rain. )
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And now, without any further delays.... 

 CHAPTER 8

Robert wasn’t sure how long the kiss lasted. )
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This was supposed to be the beginning of Chapter Seven, but it turns out it was the end of Chapter Six all along. (Pleasedon'tkillme.)


CHAPTER 6
(Part Two)

It was not easy to find a cab in Paradiso at ten o’clock the morning after Bacchanal. )



 
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If this chapter seems familiar to old readers...it is. This is the only chapter I saved from the first version. Mostly because of sex. Yes, this is a bit of a cheat. Sorry! The next brand spankin' new chapter will be posted soon. Until then, hope you enjoy.


CHAPTER 6

Robert was drunk. )
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I've had a crap day, so I'm posting this a week ahead of schedule in order that I may feel productive. Cheers!




CHAPTER 4

 

 

The inn was one of those Paradiso after-fuck establishments, cheap beds and cheaper booze. )

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